Tuesday, 5 March 2013

Academic Writing


Perhaps I am completely out of it but I had no idea what “Fab Labs” were before I read the Troxler article. I found myself scrambling to figure it all out. But then again, I often do that when reading a new subject area. I hear myself repeating in my inside voice: “what the hell is he trying to say”.  I hear it an awful lot. Now this may not be always because the articles are over my head or outside my comfort zone of understanding. Though, sadly it is often the case. Sometimes though (quite often in fact) academic articles are obtuse, rambling, jargon laden pontifications. In these cases, I do find it hard to delve into the topic and become interested. As a previous English major (I'd rather be reading Chaucer if the truth be known), I find a lot of academic writing is difficult if not impossible to suffer through. Not exactly junk, but often there are great ideas disguised with excess wordiness. While I really am fond of theorist’s like Judith Butler, I cringe at the memory of plodding through these theories in my undergraduate years. It reminds me of those crazy attempts at showing academic writing to be more farce than substance, like Alan Sokal’s nonsense article hoax in the mid-1990’s (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sokal_affair) that was jam packed with postmodern and deconstructionist babble and fooled the best and the brightest academics. The communal efforts of altruistic creation in the Fab Lab article also reminded me of some silly open source projects such as the Postmodernism Essay generator (http://www.elsewhere.org/pomo/), which is a lot of fun when you have some spare time between assignments. Ok - lots of fun but, let’s get back to the reality at hand. Academic writing isn't all bad. And, all that being said, I actually enjoyed the three peer review options. Don’t get me wrong … there is definitely some criticism to be had but going through the articles made me think about writing styles and of why we write the way we write when writing for academia. What makes us want to say so much that we end up saying so little? When I have to think about critical reading tips that help me get through articles, I guess the most helpful and effective tip that I continue to stick with is the practice of asking questions about each section of an article. "Does this make sense?" "What is the writer trying to say?" "What is the writer attempting to prove?" Writing down these notes in the margins is probably the best reading advice I have ever learned and have stuck with throughout grad school.

2 comments:

  1. I also have an undergrad in English and remember very slowly reading through Judith Butler trying to understand what exactly she was saying. I felt like every time I almost grasped one of her theories, it would be gone just as quickly.

    While academic articles can be difficult to read, I agree with you when you say that academic writing isn't all that bad. If the content is something that interests you, academic writing can actually be quite enjoyable. For example, I really enjoyed Jenna Hartel’s article on the hobby of gourmet cooking and I found it easy to read partly because I am interested in gourmet cooking and partly because the concepts were not new to me. Having taken Jenna’s workshop on the liberal arts hobby, I found this article easy to read because I had already been introduced to the subject area. Having a foundation of knowledge in a subject area certainly makes reading information on that area easier to do. In the same way, I think reading a lot of academic articles helps us anticipate what kind of language the authors will use, and that the more articles we read, the easier it will be to understand them. In other words, practice makes perfect.

    One book that I found really helped me deconstruct critical works was The Theory Toolbox: Critical Concepts for the Humanities, Arts, & Social Sciences by Jeffrey Nealson and Susan Searls Giroux. This book breaks down a lot of concepts found in academic articles in the social sciences such as authority, subjectivity, ideology, postmodernism, and agency. I found this book to be a useful resource to introduce students to core theories in the social sciences, which in turn can help breakdown the kind of language used in scholarly writing.

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  2. I completely agree with you Jude, I find the excessive wordiness of some academic articles so frustrating. Especially when they use the most complicated language. Even though it could have been said much simpler. Although I truly believe some people have a gift to write eloquently, (I am not one of them) reading an article that is clear and concise is wonderful. I really like your tips on continuously asking yourself "Does this make sense?" "What is the writer trying to say?" "What is the writer attempting to prove?. I will be keeping this in mind as I write my peer review today!

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